Liberty Hill by Sonia Heisinger - This young adult book was offered for free on Kindle some time ago, and the description and cover caught my eye. There are two main characters - Lucius Flynn and Evelyn Brennan. They were childhood friends, and their fathers planned for them to marry when they came of age. Both are from Irish families that came to New York City and built a shipping business together. However, the marriage is something neither of them really want. Under the pretense of a honeymoon trip, they instead set out to the goldfields of California via the Panama route. Lucius is planning to use Evelyn's dowry money to set himself up as a gold miner and build a new life for himself, and he promises to send Evelyn back to Ireland as she wishes as soon as he has done so; and in the meantime they agree to keep the fact that they are married a secret. They make friends and enemies while on their journey, and face many dangers and adventures. All the while, Lucius and Evelyn are in a back-and-forth pattern in their relationship - do they trust each other? do they even like each other? - and both find that perhaps dissolving the marriage might not be best after all. Lucius is full of faults - he is a notorious drinker and gambler, he takes reckless chances with Evelyn's money, and when he does attempt to be a gentleman and a man that Evelyn can trust and respect, luck is not with him. For her part, Evelyn is maddeningly stubborn and cold-hearted, reluctant to give Lucius a fair chance when he does try. Neither of them are particularly likable, and I was sometimes stumped as to why any of the characters like either one of them, never mind how they might be attracted to one another. Lucius does show some growth and development as a character through the story, but Evelyn softened only the tiniest bit as the plot developed.
I was kept interested by the storyline and the hope that Lucius and Evelyn would eventually overcome their rocky start and patch up their relationship, perhaps even find happiness. I became dismayed when I realized I was well past the halfway mark of the book and they were nowhere near California yet. By the time I reached the end of the book, I had suspected that they wouldn't reach their destination and perhaps there would be a sequel. And that turned out to be the case. I guess somehow I missed the fact that this is supposed to be the first in a series! I don't suppose it's really a spoiler alert to say that the story definitely doesn't end with this first book in the series, and that the ending wasn't particularly satisfying as far as resolving various plot elements. The reader really is left hanging and waiting for the next installment, should they be interested enough in reading it. I am not sure whether I will or not. It won't be a priority, let's put it that way. My other criticism is that while the narration remains in third person throughout, it jumps about quite randomly as to which character's point of view is dominant. This type of narration works well when a particular chapter or section sticks with one character and then there is a break before switching to another character so that it's clear to the reader. This author didn't wait for chapter or section breaks to switch focus, and sometimes didn't even wait for a new paragraph, so I was left feeling almost disoriented.
I was kept interested by the storyline and the hope that Lucius and Evelyn would eventually overcome their rocky start and patch up their relationship, perhaps even find happiness. I became dismayed when I realized I was well past the halfway mark of the book and they were nowhere near California yet. By the time I reached the end of the book, I had suspected that they wouldn't reach their destination and perhaps there would be a sequel. And that turned out to be the case. I guess somehow I missed the fact that this is supposed to be the first in a series! I don't suppose it's really a spoiler alert to say that the story definitely doesn't end with this first book in the series, and that the ending wasn't particularly satisfying as far as resolving various plot elements. The reader really is left hanging and waiting for the next installment, should they be interested enough in reading it. I am not sure whether I will or not. It won't be a priority, let's put it that way. My other criticism is that while the narration remains in third person throughout, it jumps about quite randomly as to which character's point of view is dominant. This type of narration works well when a particular chapter or section sticks with one character and then there is a break before switching to another character so that it's clear to the reader. This author didn't wait for chapter or section breaks to switch focus, and sometimes didn't even wait for a new paragraph, so I was left feeling almost disoriented.
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