Mr & Mrs Fitzwilliam Darcy: Two Shall Become One by Sharon Lathan - Have you ever read a book from the Best Seller List that everyone else was raving about, but it totally left you flat? That's kind of what my experience with this book was. I'm glad I only borrowed it and didn't pay for it, and I am baffled as to why this author is acclaimed by many as one of the best writers of P&P sequels.
My first complaint is that this "novel" doesn't even have a storyline! When I was in school, I was taught that a good story has to have some kind of conflict that is resolved. There is little of that in this selection, and as such, there is no ongoing plot to tie the book together. As the book starts with the Darcy wedding day, the wedding night jitters that Elizabeth experiences are presented as being a sort of conflict, but of course that is resolved within the next chapter and this sets the tone for the rest of the book (I'll get to that in a moment because it is another complaint.). Then there really is nothing else that might qualify as conflict until almost the end, when Elizabeth suffers an accident that threatens her health and when Darcy discovers that the inappropriate advances of another man were the cause of the accident, he challenges the man to a duel. But overall, I can summarize the "plot" and save you the trouble of reading the book this way: Darcy and Elizabeth get frisky in every room of Pemberley, and nothing else very interesting ever happens. Actually, their panting and lustful obsession isn't very interesting either, because it's just the same thing recycled in every chapter.
That is my second complaint - essentially the book is a series of bedroom scenes, actually the same scene presented over and over again with some minor variations in location and position, and each one accompanied by a sickly sweet and ridiculous 'dialogue' of "Precious love... I need you so... Beloved wife... Adored husband..." BARF. Okay, I'm glad they love each other and have a mutually satisfying marriage bed - I'd expect no less - but 1) I don't need to hear or read about it over and over again; and 2) it's just very badly done and unbelievable. Like I said, same scene over and over again with a couple of minor variations. At least they are not overly graphic in terms of dirty language or body part descriptions, but still. There is little storytelling value in all the "rising desire... blissful union... breathless passion..." nonsense that makes up at least three-quarters of the pages.
I also take exception to the reader reviews that say "this could have been written by Austen herself" and wonder whether those readers have actually read any of Austen's works or just some of the poorer fan fiction. Thankfully, Lathan does have a solid command of the English language and the writing itself is not bad, but it certainly is not comparable to Austen's style, especially the dialogue.
To be fair, there are some things I did appreciate about this book. Having read some fan fiction that was riddled with horrible mistakes in everything from grammar to historical accuracy, I was glad to find little to complain about in that regard. There were a couple of word usages that I thought were out of their time (for example, Elizabeth telling Darcy he was "cute" as if they had suddenly been transported to the 1980s) but overall that aspect of the writing was very good. Inasmuch as I hated the repetitious and unrealistic lust scenes, I need to say that I truly appreciate that Lathan's Darcy and Elizabeth both remained chaste until their wedding day. It seems to be popular among the fan fiction writers to portray Darcy as a complete rake with vast sensual experience, and in my opinion this is completely opposed to the character Austen created. Lathan's Darcy makes it very clear to Elizabeth that he has waited for marriage. (This actually creates a problem though, because on their wedding night, he seems to be extremely knowledgeable. Lathan "solves" this problem by having him confess later to Elizabeth that he is in possession of a couple of "instructional" books. Good grief.) And Lathan does a commendable job of having the characters continue to act in keeping with their descriptions by Austen, although their dialogue is certainly simpler.
After so many complaints about the book, it shames me somewhat to admit that I will probably read the rest of this series, simply because I have the fourth book and feel like I should read those in between. I have no great expectation that the second and third will differ much from this one, so it likely won't take me long to get through them. I plan to skim the lust scenes since they are all the same anyway.
By the same author: one of the novellas in
A Darcy Christmas. It's interesting to note that my review of that particular story was summarized as "Not much of a storyline, but I had no complaints either." I guess since it was a short story and Elizabeth was heavily pregnant, there was probably only one lust scene. LOL
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